Today, I commented on my classmate, Riley's Summer Learning Journey blog post.
I commented on his blog post that I have done the same task as well and that I enjoyed it.
The feedback I gave to him was to talk about the first slide he made. This will help the readers to understand more about the topic.
I got to give an advice to Riley that I think it was good advice but I think I should give more specific advise .
Kia ora Sahil!
ReplyDeleteMy name is Chris, I’m one of the blog commenters from the Summer Learning Journey, 2021/2022.
Tēnā koe for doing the Spread the Word activity, I hope you enjoyed looking at what others have done!
It’s great that you’re being reflective in saying that you think you could give more detailed feedback in the future. In saying that, you still said something positive, as well as found common ground about the task, which are both awesome so well done!
Can’t wait to see what else you produce throughout the Summer Learning Journey!
Ka kite ano!
Chris
Kia ora Chris,
DeleteThank you for commenting on my blog post and for the feeback too.
I am excited for doing the Summer Learning Journey tasks!
It was nice to know you and I am looking forward to see your comments.
How do you think I can improve in commenting? What do you think I should add in my comments?
Thank you so much!
I am looking forward for your reply
Sahil