Today, I commented on five student's blog post for this task.
First, I took screenshots of their blog posts and my comment.
The students I commented on were Densyn, Sophie, Jebrael, Matheus and O’Ninesha.
A blog post that was made by my classmate was Densyn's.
A blog post that was made by a student from a different school was Sophie's.
A blog post that made me laugh was Jebrael's.
A blog post that I found interesting was Matheus's.
A blog post that has awesome art was O'Ninesha's.
The things that I liked about their blog posts was that they had awesome art, interesting words, well-explained and that they added lots of information.
I learnt the importance of commenting as it encourages other people to reply back.
I liked doing this Summer Learning Journey task because I got a chance to comment on other students blog post and talk to them in the comments.
Mōrena Sahil!
ReplyDeleteChris here, from the Summer Learning Journey.
Pai mahi on doing the Spread the Word Kickstart activity! Glad you enjoyed it! So great to see all these positive comments, building up others is so important.
I really like how detailed your comments were as well, particularly when you were relating your own work and experiences to some of the things you found, like in your comment directed at Matheus. Did you get many replies back since posting your comments?
Looking forward to what else you post during the Summer Learning Journey!
Ngā mihi,
Chris
Kia ora Chris,
ReplyDeleteThank you for commenting on my blog post and the feedback too.
Yes, I think relating my work in the comment is good because it makes the comment look better.
Yes, I did get a reply from my classmate Kaysorn.
What do you think can make a comment better?
Thank you so much!
I am looking forward to your reply.
Sahil
Kia ora Sahil,
DeleteThat's great that Kaysorn replied! And yes you're right, relating your work in your comments does strengthen them. I'm not sure what else you could do to improve them, honestly. The fact they're positive, engaging, and well thought out basically covers it for now!
Pai mahi,
Chris