Friday, January 7, 2022

SLJ Step It Up: Poetry Slam Toru

Today, I did a task in which I wrote a Tanka poem on something that reminds me of summer..

First, I I watched this video to get some more information about tankas.

Second, I read more about tankas on this site so that I get an idea of what I am about to do. 

Third, I thought about what comes in my mind when I think about summer.

I chose ice creams because it is my favourite desert and it is very refreshing to eat in summer.

Next, I created a google drawing and added an image of ice creams as my background.

Then, I wrote my tanka and made a screencastify while recording myself reading my poem.

Lastly, I embeded my screencastify on my blog post and made sure to change the permission settings to anyone with link. 

I learnt that that tanka is another ancient Japanese form of poetry but these poems have five lines. These lines contain 5, 7, 5, 7, and 7 syllables. It is a little bit like haiku but with two extra long lines.

An interesting fact is that Tanka means a “short song” and has been an important literary form in Japanese culture for nearly a thousand years. .

I liked doing this Summer Learning Journey task because I got to learn the difference between a haiku and a tanka poem.

4 comments:

  1. Kia Ora Sahil,

    My name is Zana and I am a blog commenter from the summer learning journey.

    Now I see your tanka poem, it seems I had confused your ice cream themed tanka as your sunflower tanka poem. You did an amazing job writing both and stuck to the syllable rules perfectly.

    The history and culture behind both haiku and tanka poems are very interesting and I am glad that you are learning facts about the history behind each activity.

    Keep up the good work and I hope to see more of your posts during the Summer Learning Journey!!

    Ngā mihi nui,
    Zana Yates

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    1. Kia ora Zana,

      Thank you for commenting on my blog post and the feedback too.
      Yes, I liked this task because I got to learn the history of Japanese poems.
      Did you know that the haiku first emerged in Japanese literature during the 17th century?
      And do you like writting poems?

      Thank you so much!
      I am looking forward to your reply.
      Sahil

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  2. Kia ora Sahil. Phil here from the Poetry Slam team. Thanks for sharing your awesome poem. I really love the way you explain the whole process of you completing the activity. Your expression is great when you're reading your poems. Don't forget to enter your poem into the slam using this form. Then you can head to this site to check out some other students' poems and leave them some comments. Keep up the amazing mahi!

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    1. Kia ora Phil,

      Thank you for commenting on my blog post and the feedback too.
      Thanks for reminding me to fill the form.
      I will also check out some other students' poems and leave them some comments.

      Thank you so much!
      I am looking forward to your reply.
      Sahil

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